Thursday, 29 September 2011

Story~

There were four tennagers who decided to go to a big house for party. That house was not the house thag we usually  seen , that was a house with a scary story.
"I am so excitied abiut tha party ! What food are we going to have ?" said Jerry, he was a boy that had two girlfriend at the same time. They went to a supermarket and got a lot of food. " Oh my gosh ! I am nopt ready for the party. Can we move to other place?" said Perry, she was the sister of Jerry. "Paul is going to protect you, and I am going to save Jan in the devil hand" While they talked, they already arrived the house.
This house was so funny. A big orange door with som epink little dot,the wall of the house was in lime green.It was not look scary at all. And they walked in with laughing and talking. In the house, there was four rooms wih different colour, red, yellow, green and blue. "This house is great, it must not have that terrible story" said Jan.
They started their party in a second. Chicken, pizza. chips and coke were on the big red table in the middle of the dinning room. They started eating. "I can not believe that house has ghost." "It is true. The people who come here will become no memory about the past." "No....I want go now.." The teenagers kept talking during the party.
Suddenly, a white beam came though the window of the house. It became bigger and bigger. The teenagers looked at it and waited for something special to happen. A "thing" came out from the light beam, it looked like a human but also like a mouse. "I came here everyday...hehehehehe....I came here everyday..." said  the "thing" with a terrible Donald Duck sound. "Is that Mickey Mouse with Donald Duck voice?"said Paul. "It is so cute, what is your name?" said Jan. "I am Buzz Lightyear...Buzz Lightyear, not Donald or Mickey. They are my friends...my friends."said Buzz. The teenagers kept laughing.
"Don't laugh !" said Buzz. It started to use it's finger with a green light to point on Jan's face. She screamed,and she fell asleep and became small suddenly.They all so scared and tried to find a way to get out of this house. " I wanna eat...I wanna eat..."said Buzz. They gave it all the food that they brought. Perry cried because she is too scared. Buzz pointed to Perry, and it closed it eyes,and the green light was glowing. Paul ran in front of Buzz, he pushed the finger back to Buzz's head. And the green light came out, Buzz fell on the floor.
Afterthat, Paul, Perry,Jerry with a small sleeping Jan on his hand went out of this house. The colour of the house became black and white, and Jan was awake and backed to the origanal size. "Where am I?"asked Jan. Perry,Paul and Jerry hugged her and started crying. Jan pulled Jerry away, and said " Who are you?Do I know you?" Everyone shocked. Jerry's phone rang suddenly."Hey,babe....okay,I am going to meet you now... okay...bye my girl." "Are you going to meet your girlfriend? Goodbye my new friend"said Jan.